Tillie Rolfe G235 A2 Film Noir

http://prezi.com/nd0bqsoecfak/?utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=copy&rc=ex0share Feedback : What's its purpose?  The purpose of my pitch is to develop my outlined idea further of my documentary, it enables me to think of any additional details, equipment or elements that I should add to improve my documentary. By talking to my class it could allow me to identify and distinguish my target audiences by age, gender and interests. What you did? I went through my project in depth talking about my outlined idea, what the documentary is going to be like, examples that inspired me, information from recces sheet and location scouting sheet, logistics, problems I may encounter, target audiences, institutions, what will happen in the extract and marketing.  How it went?   I think it went well because I got positive feedback and questions that made me think how I am going to structure and plan my documentary which is important. I think I should have included more in

1 FADE IN: Scene 1 EXT. Bedford prison- day Dissolve/fade        In the heart of Bedfordshire, south of England, is Bedford prison containing one of Britain's most violent killers. Scene 1 presents the outside of Bedford prison showing the location where the documentary is set NARRATOR: TILLIE ROLFE, British story specialist, narrator and presenter for many documentaries of varied genres, 17 years old. Narrator Bedford prison. Situated in Bedfordshire is a maximum security unit home to some of Britain's violent criminals, one of them being Niamh Slaney. Slaney has murdered 11 people and has been given a 250 year prison sentence. Her case has raised serious questions, what causes extreme violence? and what we understand about the nature of evil itself? I have come here to meet her face to face to see if she will tell us what made her such a violent killer. Scene 2 IN. My house/Bedford prison Scene 2 presents an interview with the prisoner inside the p

This is a extreme long/slight ariel and high angle shot of Rochester New York State. The mise en scene presents an urban city landscape which presents the location of the documentary and implies that the prison is populated and big. The scenic view shows little colour apart from some greenery of the trees, this is because the frame is mainly of brown/beige plain and unsightly buildings. There is non- diegetic sound of police sirens and the buzz of traffic in the populated city. The police sirens show the audience the crime and trouble in this area linking back to this documentary about a serial killer. There is diegetic music which has a slow tempo, low pitch and repetitive beat which fades out as dialogue is introduced. The editing is quick and snappy as it cuts from different shots showing the variety of locations in New York. This is a medium long and eye level angle shot of the outside of the prison showing huge razor wire gates and large beige blocked buildings with cameras an